Haha as I read them I'll keep leaving my comments about them. The writing is nowhere near as bad as Twilight though! Having read a bit further, I feel like perhaps the writing is lacking some sort of emotion for me. Like I'm reading all these battle scenes but it's feeling a bit clinical right now. We'll see how that changes as this is all mostly setting up for the main point right now anyway.
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Haha as I read them I'll keep leaving my comments about them. The writing is nowhere near as bad as Twilight though! Having read a bit further, I feel like perhaps the writing is lacking some sort of emotion for me. Like I'm reading all these battle scenes but it's feeling a bit clinical right now. We'll see how that changes as this is all mostly setting up for the main point right now anyway.